This poem is adorable, I absolutely love it.
Especially this part:

"Baby, I've written this as a final goodbye
If the day comes to soon

Don't forget about our dreams
Because you can make them come true
Don't forget about me
Because I wont ever forget about you"

I don't know why, it just stood out to me. It was beautifully written, and flowed flawlessly. The words in this stanza just seemed to have so much power and emotion. This is where I really connected with the poem. I can't tell you enough how beautiful and heart-warming it is!

5/5 =] It was an excellent piece.

This is so sweet, sincere, and adorable (: I've read a few pieces of your work, and the only suggestions I have are these: though your poems are very heartfelt, they lack a certain pow quality. Some of the rhymes used are worn out; try to broaden vocabulary, and use metaphors, similes etc. The technical part of poetry cannot be left out, it's the studious part, but it is important. Also, the cadence in your pieces is a bit jumpy. I like that you have no formal set structure, couplets then quatrains blah blah blah, but try to even out your lines, it will set the flow in motion. You have good promise as a writer, I hope you haven't taken offense it what I've said. (: Good work, keep writing down the bones! ***