You go girl, haha. this was sad but almost inspirational. sends out a message that you should never let anyone walk all over you, even if it hurts to turn away. i like it, good job.

I loved the message and emotion you captured with your words in this poem. The last line tied the title in very well. My one suggest would be to do a bit of editing, so that the rhyming isn't quite so forced. You have some great rhymes, but some other ones are a bit of a stretch, just to rhyme, and I think it takes away from the poem a bit. Still some great imagery. well written.

Your poem is wonderful. I love the strength of your emotions that rise from your words. I also love the concept and meaning of the poem. Your flow was excellent. The simplicity was beautiful and it was descriptive. Great write. 5/5

Oh this is great, I really like this and can really relate. The flow is wonderful, and your wording is great too... 5/5

The title is very powerful, and the rhyming works well. Great job. =]

And, thanks for the comment.

Your poems are great.. I can relate to them. Thanks for sharing