2nd paragraph change a world you but no and its supposed to be not. Other than that I like it alot. Very well written and straight from the heart.But in my opinion If she messed the two you up then why get back w/ someone who might do the same thing again?But thats jsut me.I loved your choice or words and your emotions

I really enjoyed reading this poem it has alot of emotion!! 5/5

Great poem i really liked this one. keep up the good work ^_^

I really like dis poem alot