by Gray Colored Heart Oct 2, 2008
category :
Internet slang /
life, society
With bloodshot eyes I watch you sleeping, |
by Ashley
Uhhhh... wat??? |
Wow Lorraine...I'm speechless...ecspecially you saying you don't know how to write poems. If you rhymed a little more, and if you made your stanza's longer/same length, this would be excellent! but it's still great, Lorraine. I don't know what to say! |