by Nicko Oct 2, 2008
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
The golden Oak casts its shadow |
by Dark Secrets
Wow!!! such a beutiful poem. There's more to it than lines and words. |
10/10 good work! |
I enjoyed the whole piece, your word choice and the imagery, but your last 2 lines are my favorite part of this piece, it tied it together quite nicely and I found them to be rather strong. Nice work. |
Very thoutht provoking sharp contrast |