"Autumnal hymns floating by, tightly wrapping branches
Gauzy breath of Winter dancing lowly while it heaves"

Rachel, this entire poem simply blows me away. :) Especially the lines I have quoted above! I do not know anyone else who is able to stun me with the way they describe such strong images. You and your words, are masterpieces all their own. :)

This is really inspiring .. I never seen a poem like that , like format wise . 5/5

Mesmerizing piece. i love the way you gave personification to the trees.
Your description was lovely and the way you connected it to yourself and the way you would like to feel the love nature shows..

beautufully done!

**Ada**
*aBSwaBHiaPL*

This blew me away! Very well-expressed and flowing. Keep it up!

Great poem i really liked this one. keep up the good work ^_^