Seeking Comfort in Nature
by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life Oct 2, 2008
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Beautiful white clouds |
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16 years ago
by sezz
Yet another great visual. fantastic work 5/5
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16 years ago
by Ash
Amazing poem. Simple and yet brilliant in the sense that you allowed so many images to flow thru this piece.
I like the repition - it just added a warm effect to the whole poem. And I also like the fact that you created this contrast between nature and oneself.
Amazing work that deserves nothing less than 5/5. -
16 years ago
by Marc Ortiz
This poem deserves a 5/5. It was amazing. The descriptions was direct. Everything from start to finish flowed well.
I really like how you end your poems. It's somewhat unexpected. Unpredictable = Great.
Beautiful white clouds
Let me sleep on you tonight
Help me see that life is not as scary as it seems
= I really like this stanza. I think it was a great idea to use 'clouds'
I always thought when I was a kid (what if we can touch the clouds)
Anyway keep up the good work.
