Comments : Snow (Haiku-trio)

  • 16 years ago

    by kerry

    That was a lovely poem great job x

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I love it! Oh, how beautiful this is, Michael!
    Your talent is shining more brightly every day:)
    Bravo my friend on yet another gem!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Michael
    Great job on your Haiku's

    ii
    Catch flakes on your tongue,
    cold feathers melt to water.
    Cherry face tingles

    As children we use to stand at the windows waiting for those first flakes to fall. So we could rush out the door to catch them on our tounges.

    iii

    Rolling snow around,
    sculpting a jolly white man,
    with a carrot nose.

    How could we ever forget that smiling snowman standing gaurd over our house on those dark winter nights. Waiting to greet us in the morning. The sadness we felt when the tempture rose slowly melting our friend.
    Thanks for bring these memories to light once again :)
    Take care
    Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Fran

    These are excellent haiku's, especially the first one which is superb. But they are all charming. Well done.