Comments : What are You?

  • Aww...so sad..but very good *wipes a tear away*

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    This was such an emotional write CJ. So many of us get caught up in love and it doesnt matter what the other person does to us, how they treat us, we still love them.
    The way you wrote this poem was very unique, i liked it a lot.

    Why is it so easy for you to bring me to tears?
    ^^ Thats what love does to you CJ. Very nice line.

    Was all the love I had is gone? Who's to blame?
    ^^ Okay, this is good, but the wording/tenses are a little off.

    'Was all the love i had gone? Who's to blame?
    ^^ That would be better, without the is in there. If the syllable count works out off if you take out the 'is' then maybe:
    'was all the love i had just gone? Who's to blame?'

    Nice poem :]
    5/5