Comments : The lake

  • 16 years ago

    by Wereallbladesarntwe

    I love the vivid picture this paints, great write, makes me want to get my tent and bugger off to the nearest lake too, lol,nice one mate, xp

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Kerry,

    I really loved this poem, it is timeless and takes the reader (me) to an idealic land, where peace and beauty are all around. It is certainly somewhere I would love to go when this world becomes too much. Sharing this haven with a loved one makes it totally perfect, a private scene for your own pleasure.

    Well done

    Michael