The Gods softly chant your name

by Ingrid   Oct 2, 2008


Hair that shines like gold
Eyes that brighten up my darkest day
A smile that lights a thousand candles
Bless the day you came my way

My pure and uncut diamond,
radiant like the suns reflection in the sea
A thousand fold mirrored image
of the love you show to me

The Gods softly chant your name,
as the wind carries you to our sandy shore
and while the sun sets in shades of purple and pink
we get lost in an embrace that will last forever more

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  • 16 years ago

    by dora

    Aww your poem was so sweet and loving!! i loved this verse:

    "Hair that shines like gold
    Eyes that brighten up my darkest day
    A smile that lights a thousand candles
    Bless the day you came my way" - this is great!!

    this poem was so beautifully written, i loved it! great use of worlds, flow was good, great work 5/5!!

  • 16 years ago

    by NoUr

    Another soft and sweet poem of yours...

    i love the tenderness u have in the way you write...

    keep writting ingrid, wish u the best in life :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Ingrid,

    this is a beautifully discriptive poem. A tribute to someone very special and I must say they certainly sound it.

    I love how you finish by being in their arms with the setting sun in its radiant sky..a lovely scene.

    well done

    Michael

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