I need you to put my broken heart at ease

by Belial   Oct 2, 2008


Broken heart, broken dreams
All alone again it seems
This life, it just seems so whack
Then you come by and rub your hand across my back
I shudder and moan at your touch
The way you look at me is just too much
I think I may have fallen in love
Our souls bind into the clouds above
I need you, to put my broken heart at ease

You are so exquisite with beauty
You make me feel so fruity
Not in a bad way, not at all
But when youre gone I want to bawl
You make my heart jump several beats
And when we begin to make love under the sheets
I wont be greedy, because all I want is to see you pleased
Now that Im with you my heart shall be appeased.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Enigma

    Lol xD

    ''You make me feel so fruity''

    or something. funny line x]

    good job though x]

  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    This is a complete opposite type of emotion to the other poem i read-yet still very good.
    there were a couple of lines that i felt you just grabbed at a word that rhymed-some last words didnt seem to fit as well as others-but hey-we all do it.

    a very sweet embracing poem-good job.

    aish
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by PoeticSoul

    Wow that was a really moving poem i enjoyed it it was very beautiful.

  • 16 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    Awesome i really like it
    it has like the rough true emotion feel
    i really do like it

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