Distressed

by Ellie   Oct 2, 2008


You've done more damage than can be undone
I don't know how I'll go on
You really broke my heart
You tore me down

'Cause your works whisk through my head
And i feel as if I'm already dead

We're not speaking anymore
'Cause you are so vain
I try to forget the thoughts in my head
But I'm stuck here in the rain
'Cause I've lost a part of me
Why can't the pain just go away?
I feel so betrayed
But still you are so cliche

'Cause your words whisk through my head
And I feel as if I'm already dead

I wanted nothing more than
To be with you forever
But I shed too many tears
This is more than I can endeavor
'Cause you ripped me in two

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  • 16 years ago

    by LitxUpxWithxLife

    I hope this wasn't about me. I don't ever want you to feel this way again, Mon Cherie.
    You wanted me to be honest about your poetry, so here it is. Read it out loud, parts of it seems a little forced. Good emotional flow though, your emotions shine through clear. Good write though honey.(5/5)

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