I like alot! very deep! good job!

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Wonderful!!
Simply amazing.. i like the way you used personification and allegory together with this poem. the metaphors too are inspiring and outstanding..

love your choice of words!

"Calmly foreseeing future within Pain's womb"
one of my favorite lines in this poem. I like the way you put Calmly and Pain together in this sentence. ironic yet truthful!!

like i said and i'll say it again your a very talented writer! please keep writing!

**Ada**
*aBSwaBHiaPL*

This is great.
Amazing word choices.
Bravo.

I like the word choice and flow...