I stumbled on your work because I said I would, and i know i'm a year late haha. Anyway, about the poem:

First off, i loved the topic of the poem, because really we don't get enough of that. There's so much sadness in the world that its almost as if we give it more attention then in the sunlight eh?

Second, the flow was like a dog shaking off from a bath, most of the water came out, but a few were still on the dog. At some parts the flow is a teeny bit choppy, but also I could have read it differently.

Third, try not to use contractions, because they kinda ickify the poem haha. But other then that, the poem like I said, was a refresh from most of what i've written.

5/5 keep up the good work, your a brilliant poetess :)