So lovely x

I enjoyed this one as well but I would advise you to stick with what you feel most comfortable with. The rhyming sounds abit forced but this has great potential.

Woooot! Sorry for the late comment...but congrats on the win! You deserved it.

Your rhyming here was FLAWLESS hun. Nothing seemed forced and it all just flowed so naturally. You should write rhyming poems more often. I would have to say this is one of your best! You expressed yourself so nicely and you didnt let the rhyming restict your emotions ... I applaud you! :]

"To fall in love and feel the same in return was my goal,
not knowing what would happen falling with heart and soul."
^We all fall in love not knowing what awaits us, heartbreak, or true happiness. But sometimes you dont know what waits for you until you take that one step and lose yourself in that blissful emotion. You expressed that wonderfully here dear.

The beginning stanza was so strong and opened the poem so beautifully, I was hooked!

"Next to our broken hearts that have yet to mend,
a day will soon come that we will love each other again. "
^Awwwww I love optimistic endings. Theres always hope in love and you expressed that nicely.

Well done Temps! This one was truly a joy to read. :]
*5/5*

This is a great rhyming poem, with hopes and love, well done.

Very good poem. Liked the flow and the wording. Gave it a 5/5

Wow that was a a very sweet love poem. I think that you did great in rhyming. I did not expect the ending and that made it even better. 5/5

Very sweet poem, Great work, And great rhyming 5/5

I fell inlove just like this once!!