by reJoyce Oct 2, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
The love I hold on to |
by Hollymariee
I really like the way it's worded , and how even though it doesn't rhyme , it has a flow to it . 4/5 |
Okay nice poem. but i think you could have done a little better with it. probably a little more description and rhyming... |