Strength of a Beating Heart

by reJoyce   Oct 2, 2008


The love I hold on to
heals the wounds of monotony
that these days bring

The work i resist
only opposes the defeat
of my hold on this pain.

I'm holding on to you
Hold on to me too

Relax your fingers
Then tighten to squeeze

Close your eyes
And breathe me in

Break the signal
That pushes me away

Let me hold your hand
And wrap you in my arms

Don't be afraid
Let go and let time prove

I love you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    I really like the way it's worded , and how even though it doesn't rhyme , it has a flow to it . 4/5

  • Okay nice poem. but i think you could have done a little better with it. probably a little more description and rhyming...
    Your word choice was good. the end however didn't flow too well, but over all i liked your poem.

    *keep writting!

    **Ada**
    *aBSwaBHiaPL*