I think you should put this under the "poems about life" category, and then "society" as the sub-heading.

I really enjoyed this poem. It was short and had a strong rhythm that never falters, which makes it highly readable. However...

"She give up everything she was,"
"To find a path that's new."

Should this either be: "She'd give up..." or "She gave up..." because there's a real sense of dialect there that makes the lines very ambiguous. I'd love to know the true intent of these two lines.