by Ignoris Oct 3, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
A silent vow, eternal bet, the time goes by without a clock |
by trippetta TC
Beautiful poem, good read right before the new year, invokes images of the art of Salvidor Dali & his paintings of melting clocks frozen in time! |
by Stephanie
I love the rhyme scheme that you've chosen, you made it work really well. (: Your word choice was extensive and simply beautiful and the flow was very smooth all the way through. You did amazing. Keep writing. (: 5/5 |
by thehangman
I loved this: "Machinery, a useless toy, a key that's meant to not unlock |