I loved this: "Machinery, a useless toy, a key that's meant to not unlock
All the clocks that tick along are simply there for time to mock." Good Job.

I love the rhyme scheme that you've chosen, you made it work really well. (: Your word choice was extensive and simply beautiful and the flow was very smooth all the way through. You did amazing. Keep writing. (: 5/5

Take care,
Steph

Beautiful poem, good read right before the new year, invokes images of the art of Salvidor Dali & his paintings of melting clocks frozen in time!