Comments : Addict

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    You really got to the core of addiction with the skill of a mainliner although skill is not the best word on my part

    I stumbled a bit on the use of the word net though it captured me like a sensless heroin shot put the abused or self abuser in a net
    Days spin too slowly in passing
    Net too swiftly in context
    not or yet would have been less puzzling

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Sorry that my comment was cut short I wanted to end my comment praising the on spot metaphors and depthof the poem