First Impressions</3

by Bethany   Oct 3, 2008


I didn't kno your name
nothing at all.
when we first met, your lips
seem to have caught my fall.
so that was our first meeting,
and you caught my eye.
i didn't kno much,
would you make me
happy or make me cry?
would you make me
fall in love, then break
my heart, or be the one
to finally stay?
did you leave footprints
in my mind, or did you
just make my day?
although you did take
a stab at my heart
then left a scar.
even at my worst, theres
a dim light coming
from the dark.
you left me in bad condition
with but one scar,
but thank you! you let
me go, before i fell
to far...

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  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    I like this poem, its unique... But a bit of advice to help with the flow (Im being a hipocrite, because not many of my poems have a good flow) If you have the same number of syllables in each line it works well :)

    P.s. LOVE the ending
    "although you did take
    a stab at my heart
    then left a scar.
    even at my worst, theres
    a dim light coming
    from the dark.
    you left me in bad condition
    with but one scar,
    but thank you! you let
    me go, before i fell
    to far... "

    Specially the last part! Can totally relate.

    Much love.xo

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