I like this poem, its unique... But a bit of advice to help with the flow (Im being a hipocrite, because not many of my poems have a good flow) If you have the same number of syllables in each line it works well :)
P.s. LOVE the ending
"although you did take
a stab at my heart
then left a scar.
even at my worst, theres
a dim light coming
from the dark.
you left me in bad condition
with but one scar,
but thank you! you let
me go, before i fell
to far... "