A feeling for two.

by Mister 47   Oct 3, 2008


*********contest poem *******************

What is love but a feeling made for two
Love is all that I will say or do
i know my girl maybe can not feel the same
but to love her more I don't feel in shame

I know what you all will say to me today
You will be hurt, stop and go your own way
I won't give her up, unless you take my heart
I simply will not live unless i have this part

you can tease me , and call me all names you can
sicko , ...face ,and degrade me as a man
Those words will not simply reach inside
Where my feelings reside and my love hide

if you love someone , you don't give him up
He deserve a fight from you not simply you drop
Don't go sitting there accept the fact of life
And quickly run away to cut with a knife

If you won't fight today for the person that you feel for
When will be the time, and for whom you will do more?
If you are really in love, the strength he will give
And your heart will beat for his right to live

I know at last what it finally will cost
I know at the end my heart maybe will fall
But it is better to have loved and lost
Than to have never loved at all

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  • 12 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    Nice poetry. I really like the language of the poem as well as rhyming... The way you expressed your unconditional love is just "Wow!"
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by ChallengexEverything

    That was amazing:]
    veryyyy nice job.

    :]
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Awww, this was yet again another great poem! i loved the wording and the rhyming. It was a very sweet love poem.. Keep up the great work

  • 15 years ago

    by CalebxXxPoet With A PurposexXx

    Once again very very awesome poem 5/5 Caleb Hammett Poet With A Purpose

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    What a sad.. but truely inspirational write.
    It is great to be in love.. unconditionally.. you wrote about loving so much that it didnt matter how much you were hurt and ridiculed, as long as you were with her, everything would be ok. Very sweet and i really.. i dont know.. this poem made me feel really content.. so thankyou for writing it. I dont remember how you went in the contest, but im sure this was a winner.

    Don't go sitting their accept the fact of life
    ^^
    Should be 'there'
    their is used in relation to another person, such as, it was their bag.

    A great poem.. i really loved this one, i think it might be one of my favourites of yours. so keep up the great work.
    5/5

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