A Winter Day

by Deana   Oct 3, 2008


Snowflakes caressed the evergreen
Then playfully ran away
Left in place a gentle kiss
The day went soft and gray

Winters cold, felt fresh and new
Couldn't feel the chill
Snuggled by the fire
A heart peaceful and still

A snowman smiled and waved hello
To children everywhere
Though the day was bitter cold
Warmth was in the air

Marshmallows on an open fire
Skaters on the lake
Snowballs gathered for the fight
A perfect winter day

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  • 15 years ago

    by Corinne

    You've summoned up a picture perfect portrayal of a winter's day! :-)

  • 16 years ago

    by ricky

    I can just picture the serentity and peace in this write. Whenever I feel anxeity, I will come back to read this piece to remember just how good the simple things in life can be so great.

  • 16 years ago

    by Searching for Guidance

    Ah :) u bring out the best in winter, which often, living in the midwest with 5+ feet of snow in the winter can be overlooked. nicely done with a great flow :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Deana
    I love winter and this brings a winter day to life :)
    Good job!
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Deana: I love it, I love the whole image you have panited with your words....it's so serene and beautiful!

    Hugs, my sweet girlfriend!

    5/5 Ingrid

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