Comments : A Winter Day

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Marshmallows on an open fire
    Skaters on the lake
    Snowballs gathered for the fight
    A perfect winter day
    ^^^
    This sure does sound like the perfect winter day.

    This poem brings a smile to my face .... it's happy and fresh and makes me feel so tranquil.
    Excellent read Deana

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Deana: I love it, I love the whole image you have panited with your words....it's so serene and beautiful!

    Hugs, my sweet girlfriend!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Deana
    I love winter and this brings a winter day to life :)
    Good job!
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Searching for Guidance

    Ah :) u bring out the best in winter, which often, living in the midwest with 5+ feet of snow in the winter can be overlooked. nicely done with a great flow :)

  • 16 years ago

    by ricky

    I can just picture the serentity and peace in this write. Whenever I feel anxeity, I will come back to read this piece to remember just how good the simple things in life can be so great.

  • 15 years ago

    by Corinne

    You've summoned up a picture perfect portrayal of a winter's day! :-)