Only For You

by Nicole the Fairy   Oct 3, 2008


~ Only For You ~
By Nicole Pirri

When I open my eyes,
I only see you.
When I open my mind,
I only think of you.

When I leak these tears,
I only cry for you.
When I laugh and shy,
I only smile for you.

When I talk aloud,
I only speak for you.
When I run away,
I only run to you.

When I reach out,
I only reach for you.
When I awake from nightmares,
I only call to you.

When I breathe,
I only breathe for you.
When I pass away,
In Heaven I only wait for you.

* Dedicated to my dear friend, Brendan =] *

Written By: Nicole Pirri
Friday, 3rd October, 2008.
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  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    See... another poem dedicated to brendan. You sure he's your friend? haha i'm really curious about this guy. Anyway

    When I open my (mine,)
    I only think of you.
    = I think it's mind? If it's mine... In my opinion it doesn't flow well.

    When I (pass,)
    In Heaven I only wait for you.
    = My suggestion add 'away' so it's pass away.

    Overall:
    Well I like your other poems better. But you wrote this for someone special. (Poems that are made from the heart are always great)

    I guess brendan was really happy to read this - I know coz if someone made me a poem I'll be really happy.

    Keep up the good work.

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