How can you judge

by iimmanni   Oct 3, 2008


How can you judge when
your not perfect your self,
when you know you have
problems too,you can't tell

me that i made them the way
they are,it was and is their choice
to see and take in the negative
what else can i do when all the

hurt comes from you
you know who are you are
and what you do, yall made me
who i am

how can you judge !!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by samkeliso

    Iimmanni no it seems as if you were talking to someone but after all i will agree with Ed Henderson your poem is full of energy

  • 16 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    What a very interesting structure you've used here. Full of energy too. Very unconventional indeed.

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