I don't like to give advice too often but

Stanza 1: 2nd line = drip, 4th = fingertip
Stanza 2: 1st line = desire, 3rd = transpire
Stanza 3: 1st line = connnection, 3rd = resurection
Stanza 4: 1st line = death, 3rd line = breath, 4th line = death
Stanza 5: 2nd line = past, 4th line = fast

I don't know if this was intentional or not to switch it up like that, but that's just a quirky thing that i noticed. i think if you stick to a particular rhyme scheme that stays consistent throughout the entire poem, it may flow better. also, resurrection and connection are misspelled. but this was still really good nonetheless, you chose your words nicely and i liked it very much. probably one of your best. 5/5

Wow!!!
This is really such a nice poem...
It's direct to the point but still you can feel the emotions...keep it up...

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10/5

^__^ like amazing ^__^ you have so much talent. 10/5 keep up the amazing work. ~KM~