That was very touching, and honest. I am so glad you have those ties to you family. They are so rare these days, treaure them and bring that love to your kiddos.

That is a well written poem. It is very personal and emotional. It is also an extremely sad poem. Definitely a poem to make those who take their siblings for granted think twice about their family. I love the way your poem is pieced together,t he story flows well. Great write. 5/5