Comments : Happy Birthday To Me

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "One year older,
    Happy birthday to me,
    Do I look any different?
    What do you see?"

    I love how you tag on the questions at the end. Everytime I begin to read one of your poems, I always am drawn in completely by your word choice and how captivating it is, nice job! :)

    "Do I seem somewhat wiser?
    Has there been a big change?
    Am I found more alluring?
    Or truly more strange."

    I think we really do ask ourselves this in our mind, and you captured that flawlessly.

    Good job, take care, 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever...

  • 16 years ago

    by Nee

    I love this piece!
    I never stumble on special-event poems, but this one I have to say was a bit capturing.

    People write about their lonely birthdays, or their surprising birthdays, but this one was different.
    Well written and I think I don't have to pick my fave stanza =)

    write on xx