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by Beautiful Chaos Oct 4, 2008 category : Life, society / about society
Serpents in my ear Pages of history crumbling Our eternal flame Flickering Golden leaves of fall Give way Death arrives on wintry wings Only skeletal remains Seasons Bringing and taking life Minds Bending, shaping and breaking Into the future Decay The inevitable end Destruction The ultimate ambition
by Poet on the Piano
"Serpents in my ear Pages of history crumbling Our eternal flame Flickering" A very captivating opening, you really drew me into this piece. "Golden leaves of fall Give way Death arrives on wintry wings Only skeletal remains" Beautifully written, breathtaking and so flawless. "Decay The inevitable end Destruction The ultimate ambition" Good ending, leaves the reader satisfyed. Take care, 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever...