"Serpents in my ear
Pages of history crumbling
Our eternal flame
Flickering"

A very captivating opening, you really drew me into this piece.

"Golden leaves of fall
Give way
Death arrives on wintry wings
Only skeletal remains"

Beautifully written, breathtaking and so flawless.

"Decay
The inevitable end
Destruction
The ultimate ambition"

Good ending, leaves the reader satisfyed. Take care, 5/5 from me. Keep writing, always and forever...