Didnt really flow so great.. i think trying to find a flow took away from the poem. maybe change your wording abit??

Personally I think this is great. I've only managed to sum up the American perspective on the fake economic decline as a quote. I find it hilarious that governments voted into power on the backs of huge cash investment by banking and industry are now throwing money at those very same banks and industries.

I guess I'll wait and see what Gordon does before I write more...

Thanks for brightening my evening!

Hahah i really love the spirit of this hillbilly type of thing... it seems like people are all so close, life is basically FUN hahaha and i really enjoyed reading this. i never really understand that perspective because well... i dont live in a place like that, but still... very cool.

5/5

Oh my gosh, I absolutely love this poem. The flow is flawless, it honestly had a rhythm to it. When you said Red I thought of Red from that 70's show, haha. I love that show. I know that's completely off topic of the poem, but oh well. You did a really good job writing this. It's refreshing to see a side of you that's not completely serious. Though I knew you weren't serious. Your poetry isn't all that serious either, more refreshing. Just as this poem is.