Oh beautiful. I love the image, and It was interested to hear what inspired this write in the first place. Haikus are so fun to read, and they usually portay a very beautiful image in the reader's mind, and this one did just that. I honestly adored this piece, and I could picture the waves coming ashore and demoloshing, or breaking all the sand castles. Loved this write! Beautiful work. 5/5.

This was simply stunning the way you worded everything, and how three lines could influence such creativity and beautiful images. You used the tiny given space so well and did not waste one word, worth the read definitly. I do not think I could ever be disappointed by your writings, keep it up.

God bless you!

~MaryAnne