I'm So Miserable.

by Courageous Dreamer   Oct 5, 2008


Mind so cluttered with thoughts, about to explode.
Head spinning around and around in circles, repeating.
Nothings seems to untangle, everything bundles together.
This continuous cycle leaves me confused every single time.

Where to go from this situation is beyond my control.
Supposedly I was never meant to be his, yet I still love him.
Everyone telling me in my ears to move on and not care,
but they don't realize how much I love him, I refuse to let go.

Tears are falling down my cheeks as my makeup smears,
my head keeps spinning as I feel like I'm about to pass out.
Heart bleeding, aching, screaming, no longer yearning, black.
Stomach twists into knots as I think of you once more...

I'm so miserable, mentally and physically, I'm numb.
that I just have no idea where I should go anymore, I'm dizzy.
I can no longer see what is around me, it's all a huge blur.
I fall to the ground, as my body can no longer take the pain.

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  • 15 years ago

    by paul alexander

    This one is very well written

    reminds me of myself

  • 15 years ago

    by MizzCici

    I really liked this poem u put ur emotins into it,and also understand how that feels i was in ur shoes once upon a time,its realheard 2 let go wen ur inlove with some1. u did a real great job keep writting....cum thro my page sumtime n leave a commnt!

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Wow, you put a lot of emotion into what you wrote. It was very strong and meaningful. The flow of the poem was perfect. You really described how you felt very well. I could really picture the words that you wrote. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Empathy

    I really like this poem to a certain extent. It shows a different atmosphere that I don't see enough of in your poems. Though I think that you could of have described the poem in a different way to make the "pain" appear more powerful, you still get the message across clear in the end. Where there may have been weak spots you made up for with your wonderful use of imagery. I think imagery really is a strong point for your work, and I'm really glad to see you use it effectively.

    Nice work.

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Whoa! im going through all of this now so i can really relate, as i read this i started to cry. this is a great poem! i love it!5/5 im in awe of this poem! its just great!

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