by BREEawNUHH
"Nothings seems to untangle, everything bundles together. |
by Ingrid
Hi, |
I really liked this poem. |
by Marc Ortiz
Hey temps. If this is real... Don't think you're miserable okay? :) |
by nikki
Whoa! im going through all of this now so i can really relate, as i read this i started to cry. this is a great poem! i love it!5/5 im in awe of this poem! its just great! |
by Empathy
I really like this poem to a certain extent. It shows a different atmosphere that I don't see enough of in your poems. Though I think that you could of have described the poem in a different way to make the "pain" appear more powerful, you still get the message across clear in the end. Where there may have been weak spots you made up for with your wonderful use of imagery. I think imagery really is a strong point for your work, and I'm really glad to see you use it effectively. |
by SashaMirage
Wow, you put a lot of emotion into what you wrote. It was very strong and meaningful. The flow of the poem was perfect. You really described how you felt very well. I could really picture the words that you wrote. 5/5 |
by MizzCici
I really liked this poem u put ur emotins into it,and also understand how that feels i was in ur shoes once upon a time,its realheard 2 let go wen ur inlove with some1. u did a real great job keep writting....cum thro my page sumtime n leave a commnt! |
This one is very well written |