I Fell so High

by SashaMirage   Oct 5, 2008


Sometimes in life we take a chance.
I give myself to you, for this dance.
So take my hand and lead the way.
But don't promise forever if you can't stay.
If love is a game then winners are few.
So if your playing with me,
then the only winner is you.
Because I'm the one who fell so high.
My love to you I submit, but why?
The only answer I know to be true...
Is because I'm falling so deeply...
in love with you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by mosha

    Heeyy its great! loved it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cara

    Aww this was gorgeous. it truely touched me with its simplicity. it was so loving. i loved your last few lines the most, they were so unique and true. totally awesome poem, one of my favourite love poems i would say.
    well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Wereallbladesarntwe

    Xcellent poem Sasha, i agree with TJ about the choice of title, great stuff, hope ours is as good, xp

  • 16 years ago

    by mostafa

    Truely simplicity speaks .. this one came out from your heart straight to ours :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    I wish if ur poem was a lil bit longer bcoz I loved it so much...it really touched me..
    Great work Sasha:)
    Keep it up...

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