Your just so dam* cute when you're mad."
Something I'm getting use to hearing.
Are you ever going to take me seriously?
Or is there something I should be fearing?

^^One thing you should know about guys Tabi: they hate arguements! they always try to avoid them and if they can't they will try to chance the subject;)
Ah men....can't live with them, can't live without them, lolol!
Sweet poem and you touched upon a subject many women are stressed about.

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

This again is really good. this one flows a little better. and its really cute. i know where your coming from so i can relate and this is really good. 5/5!!

Wow thats so cute!!!
The flow and rythm is great in this poem. Yeah, but Healing Spirit is right; guys will do anything to get out of an argument....'cause they know they'll probably lose. Keep writing. Honest Luck.

Sarah

I really loved it it touched my heart. you are really talented and i look forward to reading more i loved it really.

krysten

Aww, another sweetie. Call me hopeless romantic but these are the poems I love to read. Wonderful job.

I love it it flows nicely and isnt scatered. Great job 5/5

I'm not trying to be stubborn,
or just pick a stupid little fight.
I'm just trying to get you to see things
through a different type of light.

Oh lord .. Such a situation easy to relate to . Great stanza .

You say it really shouldn't matter,
you can't understand why i care.
But don't you see? It's important to me.
To just brush it off, don't you even dare.

Good rhyming and flow for this .

"Your just so dam* cute when you're mad."
Something I'm getting use to hearing.
Are you ever going to take me seriously?
Or is there something I should be fearing?

Once again , I love the flow for this . It's so smooth .

There are so many little things
I want to yell at you for.
But than I see the apology in your
eyes that I absolutely adore.

The two last lines need some fixing up , because the way they're devided is kind of odd . Perhaps use different words ?

All the fury & stubbornness in my head melt away.
My heart takes control, and I can't help but say:
"Baby, this really is not any fun, the only
fights I want are the "i love you more" ones. "

Here too . They just kind of go from one line to the next .. And it's awkward almost .

With the butterfly kisses
&& the little loving looks,
I can't help but smile back at you
&&forget every play from our girl "books."

I don't like this last line . The idea is really great , but that last line does throw the cuteness off :( . 4/5