One Deprived Wish.

by LiveLoveLearnDie   Oct 5, 2008


Today I wish,
I wish for all to know,
Who I am and what I know.

The hidden truth,
I wish top be shown,
I wish for all to know.

For I have no life,
I am too scared,
You have captured me.

I have been captured,
From my life,
By the one i used to love.

My father whom I used to love,
You had it coming,
For I am now deprived.

Deprived of someone who cares,
Deprived of someone to trust,
Deprived of someone to love.

Deprived of my wish,
My wish for a true father.
But, that I am deprived.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    .. I can't honestly relate to this one , but the way you write it out is so sad .. And seems so easy to picture the emotions . Well done once again . 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    Umm... this was really well it kinda makes me wonder about the background story. it seems like a prolouge. but its amazing i can feel the loss good job

  • 16 years ago

    by XXXNellieXXX

    Oh, jon, totally agree with the lines and you!!
    i hate heartbreakers but then i have to hate myself(oh darn)!!
    any way, totally excellent 20/5 lol

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    You always have catchy titles! but even more amazing poems to go with it :]

    this poem is amazing

    my favorite part:

    Deprived of someone who cares,
    Deprived of someone to trust,
    Deprived of someone to love.

    incredible... :]

    5/5

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