You always have catchy titles! but even more amazing poems to go with it :]

this poem is amazing

my favorite part:

Deprived of someone who cares,
Deprived of someone to trust,
Deprived of someone to love.

incredible... :]

5/5

Oh, jon, totally agree with the lines and you!!
i hate heartbreakers but then i have to hate myself(oh darn)!!
any way, totally excellent 20/5 lol

Umm... this was really well it kinda makes me wonder about the background story. it seems like a prolouge. but its amazing i can feel the loss good job

.. I can't honestly relate to this one , but the way you write it out is so sad .. And seems so easy to picture the emotions . Well done once again . 5/5