Great title, amazing poem. the ryme was flawless and the emotions i've felt tenfold through your well chosen words.

5/5

Wow, i totally understand, it was so amazing and heartfelt!!
awesome job. i love it so much!!

This was really good it flowed well and was heartfelt. i could feels your depths. really good i like how your last line of each stanza contradicts the first

That a grate poem! and i how that feels. i think i will send that to me dad!..lol

That was a beautiful poem. you are really good. i cant wait to read more :) 5/5

This poem was really good i love the subject and your word flow i think there are two lines that could be better worded in my opinion but i wont point out which ones because if you changed them it might ruin this amazing work of art the flaws and mistakes are what make art so amazing and this poem was nothing short of amazing