Comments : Where The Green Grass Grows

  • 16 years ago

    by Reapers ZeitGeiSt

    That's lovely...it's filled with emotions..i liked it

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Cindy, a lovely flowing poem..

    The green grass..somewhere where it is greener than here?

    Distant memories calling..someone a dear one, who still holds onto memories of you both, beckoning you away from a world of sadness?

    This person, a close person who captured your soul and undoubtedly your heart. This soul is eternally merged to yours?

    Suffering only makes you yearn for the day when you'll be together, way off in those distant skies.

    You see this 'soul mate' waiting for you, arms out wide, ready to embrace the heart and soul that has been dearly missed all these years. This time it will be forever!

    Cindy, this dream must keep help through the sad, tough times, knowing there is a welcoming light waiting for you.

    Well done on this honest write. :)

    Take care

    Michael ((hugs))

  • 16 years ago

    by Megan

    That was beautiful
    a really good write
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Once again... so beautifully written, so much emotion and so much sadness. You have a way with bringing out so much emotion and attractiveness within your poetry, I can't get enough. So to say i'm thirsty for more :]

    Such a beautiful job here Cindy, keep it up!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    I love how you captured so much emotion in this. It is so powerful. 5/5 And thanks for the comment. I really needed that.

  • 16 years ago

    by Barbi Taylor

    Your poems always carry so much meaning, this one tells a very interesting story good job!
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    5/5. no words to describe this. it just touches me in the heart. period.