by Sean Allen Jun 7, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
They spread on so thick; |
by nikki
very very very very very very very very very very brilliant poem!!! it sends your point across so clearly, absolutely great stuff! it was so cool at the end with the SCREAM going down, very interesting and great wording all throughtout it, tops stuff! |
by ~* Joyful *~
The last part was my FAVOURITE part!! i loved this poem!! |
i can tell your the type of person who cares about humanity, and who doesn't want the world to amount to anything other than "perfect". And for that you get my respect. Two thumbs up on that one. If you want to read a poem that is quite indecisive, read mine called final destination, or burning sensation. |
by Kevin
*searches desperately for a grammetical or spelling error* |
by Aken Sol
Psh. Sean, don't say that. I like this particular poem with it's chain of thoughts non-stop. You captured the flow of thought very well. |