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What you have written here was truly outstanding! ;)
Sarah 5.5.

Aww hunii this poem was so sad and deep. i duno wht to say, ur poems always get to me. uve expressed urself so well in the way uve worded ur poem. good job, stay strong 5/5.

Awww

I really liked this. It was adorable, but in a very sad way.

My father isn't my hero anymore, either. So I can really relate to this work.

The flow was nice. Great word choice. Very strong sense of emotion throughout.

5/5
Great work.

Keep writing!!

*Soraya Lowe*

This was heart-wrenching...very very strong emotions coming through.