I am going to be honest with you :) because I'm like that haha :) I actually normally don't go for these type of poems I prefer poems with a rhyming scheme. However :) This poem was unique because I haven't yet read one like this before. It's full of description which creates a very vivid image in the readers mind.
Amazing poem :) 5/5
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Roxy

I find this poem very interesting. It wasn't much at the first I found, it kept me enough to read.

You then introduced the raven. Which in many cultures the Raven is sometimes responsible for playing tricks on people, but you also used it in conjuction with Edgar Allen Poe's Raven, which most people would link with death.

I find it quite refreshing. you get a 5/5. Very well.

P.S. In some cultures crows and Ravens are the carries of the dead to the next world. If your bored you can check out some of my poems :D

Yet another great poem, you really are talented but i told you that before =) great visual