I'm rather thrilled with your writing lately!

'at least i've caught up with you,
doesn't matter if it's still too late.'

have you met someone with blue eyes recently? They keep reappearing in your poems :D

'the presence of your eyes'

and great main line to choose to repeat. Well done.
'i rush to the city where,
people line up to die.'

this holds a lot of emotions. It's very profound and symbolic. Very quotable, and usefull for the meaning of the poem.

those lines make my heart increase in pace :D