Oh no. [There she goes again]

by SilentSuicide   Oct 5, 2008


Oh no.
There she goes again.
Popping one too many again.
Pumping to keep her alive again.

Oh no.
There she goes again.
Scaring her skin again.
Hiding the prove again.

Oh no.
There she goes again.
Slipping under the water again
gaging for breath again.

Oh no.
there she goes again.
Pulling the trigger again.
X marks a miss again.

Oh no
She never did it again
For she tried it all again
And she wont ever live again

Oh no.
Oh no.
Never live again.

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  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Wow this was a very powerful poem. every time u said oh no. it just caught my attention even more. the flow was very nice. the words u choice were great. this is my favorite part.

    Oh no.
    There she goes again.
    Scaring her skin again.
    Hiding the prove again

    i think many people realte to this part. i can so relate to this part. says so much to me. it was a amazing poem you have here. i'll keep reading on.

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    This sounded like a rap to me it had a very rhythmic flow to it almost like a linkin park song I think was what first came to mind. I liked the different scenerios though I think to make it better you could have used some more descriptions to show more detail nice poem:)
    4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Nice poem. I didn't really like the reparation. Other then that it was ok. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ruthyyy

    This is a really good poem dude..

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