This is a really good poem dude..

Nice poem. I didn't really like the reparation. Other then that it was ok. 5/5

This sounded like a rap to me it had a very rhythmic flow to it almost like a linkin park song I think was what first came to mind. I liked the different scenerios though I think to make it better you could have used some more descriptions to show more detail nice poem:)
4/5

Wow this was a very powerful poem. every time u said oh no. it just caught my attention even more. the flow was very nice. the words u choice were great. this is my favorite part.

Oh no.
There she goes again.
Scaring her skin again.
Hiding the prove again

i think many people realte to this part. i can so relate to this part. says so much to me. it was a amazing poem you have here. i'll keep reading on.

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy