Comments : What I Became

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    You should know by now ,
    evil never win

    darkness fade in front of the light !!

    and you can not keep nature from blooming in your garden for ever

    :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lilith Chaotica

    Woah! that was cool! u know ,the 500 reasons to die is right. just so u know

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Well written i liked that it was a dark poem with a glimmer of hope at the end, as long as there's hope there's life, also a nice use of metaphors well done on a most enjoyable poem

    Grant